Thursday, November 25, 2010

GRAYTOWN City [Narrative]

It's been 2 days after the Minor families moved to that creepy old house on the very top of Graytown Hill. There's an old tale that said everyone that lived even only stayed there will never wento out alive, Jack Moriarty and Anne Pittsburgh was the last family that ever lived there, they died with unusual death, their body doesn't even found. "What else could possibly happen?" asked Fiona Grace, the Mayor of Graytown City with her brittish accent. "I hope nothing bad" answered her assitant with her eyes stared straight to that creepy old house.

"Mom!! I need more foods" shout Emelda Minor with her huge body shaking around the house. "Ohh.. quite already" goraned Irin Minor, Emelda's younger sister. "Just stop it guys, it's 8 P.M. all the neighbor are asleep" Shouted Mrs. Minor while she was chopping the carrots. "It's your own fault, we didn't even want to leave L.A" groaned Joanne Minor, the youngest daugther of Minor family. "Just stay quiet and eat up, dinner is serve." "FINALLY" Shouted Emelda and directly sat and took everything on the table. Suddenly the electricity were out, "Oh man!" shouted Joanne, "stay here girls, I'll go upstair to took care of Eddie and John" said Mrs. Minor. "See, every youngest child always get the most privellege." said Irin Minor with rolling her eyes, "sshh.." tried Elanor Minor to keep her younger siters quiet. "What?" asked Emelda with chewing her food, "did you hear that? Wishpered Elanor. "What?" added Joanne with her angry tone but suddenly they all heard a wishpering sound that sounded "go..a..w..ay.." with a really scary wooshing sound of wind. "AAHH!" all the girl screamed loudly, then a white rose flew in front of them and suddenly the white rose petals was fallen to the ground one by one also drops of blood, the blood went to chased Emelda, she ran as fast as she could, but it was too late, her body dissapear with nothing left, only her last chicken wing roll over the floor.

Irin's eye was getting wider, she can't believed her eyes, she ran toward Joanne and Elanor, "phew.. you guys.. are you.." Joanne and turned back and Irin screamed so loud, Joanne's and Elanor's face were covered in blood and bugs, Irin ran upstair an looked for her mother and her younger brothers, but every single room were empty, Irin walked backwards slowly and suddenly she bumped to something, Irin were surprised and scared, "mom.. Eddie.. John.. is that you?" asked Irin with her shivered lips. As she turned back it was her mom and younger brothers with blood covered all over their body, and John's arm was seemed seperated form his body, Irin jumped through the sstairs and went out, suddenly there's a big truck infronf of her "AAHH!!" screamed Irin loudly.

"Irin..Irin..?" a soft voice woke her up, "ahh.. am I in heaven, are You God?" asked Irin, "what? it's me, Elanor, what are youd reaming anyway?" giggled Elanor. "Ooh.. it's just a dream, a nightmare" thought Irin with reliefing. "Girls..girls.. listen up!" interupted Mrs. Minor, "mom?" asked Elanor. "Guess what?" "What?" "We're moving to Graytown City" said Mrs. Minor excitedly, Irin screamed loudly "NO!!!"

THE END


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